Week 11B

Today in class we started out by having the people in our row look at the scripts we wrote for today. One really good idea I got from everyone was to exaggerate how dirty the water is in the panel where the knife is in a puddle. They said it’d be okay to go over the top here and have the water be bubbling, and maybe even a dead rat is partially in the puddle. After we met with our group we took turns partnering up with people and drawing each other's characters.  A good idea that came from this was that John is wearing a butcher’s apron. From there it evolved to Arnold being held in the back of a butcher’s shop instead of a generic ruined building, and now the knife might be a clever in a puddle of blood instead of dirty water. I found that describing Arnold to other people really helped me get a better feeling for him, even if their drawings weren’t quite what I pictured. Here are the drawing from my classmates:



After drawing the characters we started making revisions to our scripts.